jueves, 16 de septiembre de 2010

KRONOS



The name of this planet is based on a Greek titan, Kronos the father of time. the people of Kronos are nice people. their diet is based on plants, they respect the living things, which means that they don't kill anything that moves. They are mysterious and dark on the outside but nice in the inside, you just have to get to know them well to notice, their planet is a little moon near the alpha-centaury solar system, their science is really advanced, they make their own energy, the wild life is very abundant. there's lots of plants and trees the oceans and rivers are clean, the air is carbon dioxide free. Their atmosphere is based on gold and oxigen, they explore the universe to collect this precious element. They are more like Venusians because they are very sentimental and they don't have any similarities to the Martians.

1 comentario:

Sitzman dijo...

Cool! Sounds like an interesting planet. I like the gold atmosphere part.

In terms of English use, be careful for long, run-on sentences. A few times it makes your writing less focused.

And be sure to capitalize the first letter in each sentence! :)

See you tomorrow!